Today I got my final draft of my second essay back. She wrote two comments on it. On the front she wrote, "Always great use of MLA format-Thank you!" Now this comment worried me a bit. MLA format? What kind of comment is that? Then on the very last page, she wrote, "Margie: What am I going to do with you? :) With the corrections you made-this paper is flawless. I rarely rarely give this grade but you deserve it. Final grade 100." So that's pretty good I guess. By the way, I made some slight word changes that I think improve it a lot. If you desire to read it again, I have changed the one on here to the current version. October 26th, entitled, "Essay #2." I know, a daring title.
The other essays are an explanatory essay and an argumentative essay, so I don't think I will put them up here, cause those kinds of essays are boring.
Mario told us today that he has applied for a another job. Hooray! Let's hope he gets it. I'm sure Rene's recommendation will be sparkling. :)
My brain feels full, but I can't seem to get my thoughts together. I guess they'll have to wait.
2 comments:
Way to kick ass!
I saw your comment on Dave's blog, and although I don't know you, I wanted to assure you that I'm cool with going back to being a lowly freelancer again. That commute was kicking my behind. Oh, and I remembered. I hate people.
Plus, I can get back to my serious blogging. This is where I'm meant to be.
Thanks! And I totally understand, I hate commuting and people, too! That's why I love working 5 minutes from my house in a room by myself like I do now. :) And it's good that you'll be blogging more. We have to have our priorities straight. :)
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